[The softball playoffs. "SAVE IT, RITA!" ", Lynn: (angered, she gets closer to Lincoln and raises a fist at him) "If you don't get out of here, I'm gonna-", Luna: (pull Lynn back) "WHOA! Lincoln: No! nosuchluck loudhouse Well here is an alternate ending to No Such Luck that ends on a happy note. "Aunt Ruth," Rita said, trying to stop the kids from doing something they'd regret, "hang up the phone." Lincoln: yeah. Morag: is it now? 2022 - 2023 Add to Favourites Comment Everyone heads to Vanzilla, but Lincoln still stays in place). The important thing is that we learn from them. "Aunt Ruth, please reconsider," Rita started with, before she interrupted by Ruth. "WE HATE DOING ALL THOSE CHORES FOR YOU, YOU FILTHY SLOB!" They knew their kids wouldn't like that but this was supposed to be a weekend for themselves, not the family, and the kids should've just accepted it and gone to Ruth's. (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. We wont! I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! Lynn: (sighs) Who am I kidding? Lincoln grabs 11 squirrel mascots and put them on his parents and sisters, minus Lily.]. "Yeah, brah." Morag: well, if you insist I suppose. Also, any negative comments or comments suggesting that I'm trying to paint the siblings in a bad light will be deleted and I will block you. After a few moments of static, a female voice was heard on the other end, "Hello, Felix. Computer typing was heard yet again and, after a few moments. Lucy: This was all just a complete tragedy and not in a good way. The Loud House Re-write #1-No Such Luck Add to Favourites By jgodzilla1212 Watch Published: May 10, 2020 75 Favourites 101 Comments 31K Views (It begins right after Lincoln tells Lily why he can't attend to Lily's play date and he bumps into Lisa) Lisa: >scoffing< Pshaw, There's no such thing as bad luck, there's only science, all else is hooey. Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. I WISH YOU'D NEVER EXISTED!!!!! ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. "What do you kids want?" "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! +7 more. (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. You're all delusional and irresponsible all the time and I HATE that! * Luan added. This confused everyone even more, until Lincoln started putting 2 and 2 together. I hate this stupid beach! Youre our brother! WE DESERVE TO BE HURT!!!! Lucy: Lincoln's right! showing a flashback of the episode No Such Luck. This made the officer raise an eyebrow, not fully believing them. Lincoln: "Coming!" Can you please just come down here? Lincoln: You know what!? I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? You overreact to everything! We just thought you were bad luck, we didnt mean to upset you like this. I don't even care about that anymore. Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! With that, the parents just held each other for the remainder of the night, promising to do whatever it took to earn back their children's trust. NOBODY!!! Lincoln: Alright then, call them. lincoln. the goth girl added. Plot. Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. Post-Story Notice: Anyway. ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. "Is that so?" Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. This Fanfic is a MASSIVE critique on every fanfic that is targeting the Episode "No Such Luck" of the Western Animation Series "The Loud House." No Such Luck Alternate ending (Bad) Deviation Actions. Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? When my so-called 'family' gets home, I'm gonna have a talk with them." I'll just play softball all by myself! Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. The End. Not. She shouted that last part at the top of her lungs. Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! It's no fun without Lincoln! Lincoln: You can't do anything right! Lincoln: Okay. ", Lynn: Oh Lincoln. [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. You kicked me out of your lives, now I'm kicking you all out of mine!! Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. We didn't just barge into the room. I hate that you never listen to reason! [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. Eventually, one of them said, "Look officer. Leni: Linky, dont shout. Lana: *Gasp* All my pets are now homeless! I loved winning so much that didn't take my failure like a good sport, and started thiswhole bycalling you bad luck. I'm the Duke! "Sure thing," the voice on the other end said. Guess they forgot to lock the windows. ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. ], Baseball Announcer: "Yowza." I do not own Loud House, Spongebob Squarepants, The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron, Wayside or Loud House Tales. ", Lori: (with a broken voice) "What kind of monsters are we?!". They messed up and their children were furious with them because of it. Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. Lincoln: Stop it! Lincoln asked, as he started crying yet had an angry look on his face, "What's really lousy is that you guys had the nerve to make us feel guilty for the stuff we did when the reason we got kicked out of the hotel was because you two decided to act like irresponsible teenagers and go for a late night swim in the pool without any swimwear on!" Lynn: Stop being such a baby and just put that suit back on! Lori soon pulled out her phone and dialed Aunt Ruth's number. Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. Lynn Sr.: OUR ONLY SON DESPISES US, WE WERE COMPLETE IDIOTS, WE RUINED HIM AND WE DESERVE IT!!!! (Family begins to come around. ", Luna: "No, you were right. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. What do you think, Pep? The squirrel mascot is dancing a little less energetic than usual. (Cries) All my precious tiaras. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! And when Maddie got up from the desk, what she saw horrified her. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. "So you thought that the best way to find a ghost, which I know for a fact aren't haunting this hotel, was to knock out your air conditioner," the man said, as he gestured to the hole that once had an air conditioner there, "Do you realize how ridiculous and stupid you sound right now?" After one loss, she claims that Lincoln is bad luck. We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. "I can't believe we didn't do that sooner," Lola responded back with, "She was nothing but an icky leech. Leni asked, an eyebrow raised, confused. 5 months of research ruined. But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. (He picks up the squirrel suit, jumps up and down on the head and starts ripping the chest)", Lynn: HEY! Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! No Such Luck, No Such Love is a The Loud House fanfic written by SpartanXHunterX which can be read here. "Yes," Lynn Sr. started with, "but to be fair you kids" He then lost his words when he saw his son giving a deep stone cold glare of anger, making him gulp in fear. "As grateful as I am that I saved you from making a dangerous decision," the man said, his tone getting lighter for a moment before returning to a serious tone, "I'm afraid that doesn't do much to the amount of trouble you're all in.". ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. ", Lola: "Don't try to fool us! Learn more. Lucy shouted, "WE DREAD GOING TO VISIT YOU AND DREAD LOOKING AT YOUR GROSS FACE!" but I just really wanted to get it off my chest. Why do these three buffoons have the room. At least this thick skin won't let me down! Status Update. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. "YOU HEARD HER!" The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. Also please don't flame me. Maybe I should just stop playing softball for a while. Lisa: Easy, easy! Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Any bad luck? "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" She then turned around, along with the other siblings, and glared at their parents. CircularBoat742 19 March 2017 User blog:CircularBoat742. They were glad that they were still together like a loving family. Those honors go to Nickelodeon, Teletoon, Chris Savino, Stephen Hillenberg, John A. Davis, Louis Sachar and Gold Cartoonist (who is located on fanfiction). IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. "Which room number is it?" 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. WE WENT TOO FAR!!! It was created for a St. Patrick's Day episode, but flopped hard. "WHENEVER WE VISIT YOU WE ARE MISERABLE!" Lucy: So, that's it then? Lincoln: Youre too stubborn to admit youre wrong, you never admit you mess up, your as gross as you are lousy and you never learn anything! Where did you get the gall to talk to us like that!? Looking at her parents in shock, she said, "You got us kicked out because you decided to go skinny dipping?" Keep on writing fics like this! Lincoln: That's what i always say. (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! ", Lori: "Oh Lincoln, if you don't feel like attending our events all the time, we're not forcing you to go. ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Fade to the sisters all waking up from their nightmares. Lisa: (sighs) Obviously one that needs our cerebrums and mental spirits adjusted. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. I feel like a fool! Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. Our family wouldn't be a family without-. "First of all, don't shout at me!," the woman said, in a tone that made Lola be quiet, "Second, if you give me a second, I'll sort this out some more." Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. No Such Luck / Frog Wild. (Inhales, then exhales) "I. Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. Despite the pain his body was in, Felix grabbed his walkie talkie and said, "Maddie." Experimental One Shot. ", (and that did it. "Well mom, you know what I think?" And after that, the whole room was silent. Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. They got to Vanzilla and saw their children sitting the car, very mad and upset. Lori said. Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. ", (the sisters cheers. Why did you kick me out of the house? I need to get out of here! Lynn: FINE! "Aha!," she said, in triumph over what she found, "It appears that you were kicked out and supposed to leave the hotel at 9 am sharp." (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! She smiled as Lincoln took it. That..That's not true. Lori: Is that literally what you think we are.? I am bad luck! Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. We get it. Lynn pitches and the opposing batter hits the ball right back her, knocking her socks, shoes, and hat off and making her spin in mid-air before landing on the ground. (Both glare at each other) First you threaten me with your lousy pop stick of a baseball bat to make me come to a disgusting game thats nothing but a waste of time, than you blame me for your loss, than you help ruin my life, than youre too stupid to listen to my confession and admit that you were wrong and than at another stupid game you dont even make it up to me and you make me into some silly object! ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. She started pacing the room, or more specifically around the couch. Lisa: (sighs in humiliation) Me neither..falling for some dumb superstition, despite always taking pride in science and not curses!! *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. And we asked, or rather demanded, they leave, that is when things got really ugly." Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. (Raises his fist at her). Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. "Kids," Lynn Sr. got up from his seat, not realizing how angry the kids were, "What are you doing here? Lincoln then brought his arms back, suggesting a family hug. (They pile into Vanzilla and go searching for him). As she pondered what he meant, she felt the room shake. He'll ruin it for them!" Rita: "Even worse than they already were!" Chester: "OK, if you know the words to this song, sing along!" [Lincoln starts song off with turntables and keyboards.] Luck. Later, in jail). I was being selfish!. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Honest! N Eddy's big picture show . Not a loud alt ending6. Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! (Bursts into tears). Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. We don't need to get violent here. (Meanwhile, back on the beach, the family has gathered together, feeling very ashamed and humiliated. After spending a good 10-15 minutes unpacking and putting everything back in the respective places in their rooms, the siblings walked into the living room and saw their parents were in fact still sitting on the couch. This is also a parody fanfiction that is based on Spongebob Squarepants' episode 'Hall Monitor,' The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron's episode 'Hall Monster,' Wayside's episode 'Safety Monitor,' it is also based on a chapter from Loud House Tales that was called 'Hall Monitor,' however that is no longer up for some reason, and Lynn Loud Jr. being a hall monitor in the Loud House season 5 episode 'Schooled!' Lisa: That's the last time I ever fall for such phone-baloney! Lincoln: "Thanks, Ms. Mulligan. "I know you're headstrong sometimes, but I know that deep down in your heart, you love me. Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! Luan: We're sorry we sold all your stuff! Especially Miss. Lucy walked towards him and they wrapped their arms around each other's shoulders. Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Rita stood up and heads to the door. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! [takes the mask off]"I was here the whole time! ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. You were fine with me sleeping outside and being locked outside? No self-insert oc this time. Inspiration for this fanfiction comes from few positive predictions for No Such Luck. Lynn sat next to her and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, in an attempt to comfort her. I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! "No," Lucy, the goth said, "Since you don't want us to be here, you can go up to the room and pack everything by yourselves." Rita walked over to her side of their bed and sat down, put her hands on her head and started sobbing. after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" I heard you scream! Lana: You know, all of a sudden, I really hate myself! What kind of family would do this to one of their own? Just tell us and well let you skip it. The voice asked. Luna: That was rockin'. Even though Lincoln was the one who brought this on himself. The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. As in, how ill knock your head over heels! Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? My first story is done. "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" "Lynn," Rita said, as she rose her head to meet with his, "Be honest with me, do you think we can earn our kids' trust back?" (facepalms. Lincoln: If superstitions and their own needs are all they want, I just won't be near them. loud house no such luck alternate ending fanfiction The students of Royal Woods elementary were anxiously awaiting in line to get their yearbooks. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. I loved it. The heat increases. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. You can never come back. They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. "Now I want an explanation," the man started with, as he stomps a few steps toward them, "As to all of this. The sound of typing on a computer was heard for a few minutes. (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! ", Lincoln: "I know how much you guys like having me there for you, and I didn't want to upset or disappoint you. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). There is the occasional food break, of course, where the reactors recount what they learned. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . He managed to, but with a twist. But right now, no! UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. That was my favourite bat! (Lincoln, without hesitation, hugs her, with the rest of the sisters joining in for another group hug. ), Lynn: (Screams in despair) ROASTED, BEATEN, VERBALLY THRASHED AND TOSSED INTO THE SEA BY MY ONLY BROTHER!!!! Trivia. Rita pondered for a moment and then said, "Hey I know, why don't we make a quick stop to Aunt Ruth's and" Her idea was interrupted by Lori slamming on the brakes hard, jerking the van to stop. (Tears up) Our only bro. Lincoln: Alright, i admit! What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? Lori yelled. The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. Look, I see sweaty footprints! There's a massive storm heading your way." Also, just to note, not all of my stories are going to be this gritty or serious or emotional. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. Sam: Luna, I got your letter. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. "YOU KIDS ARE NOTHING BUT TROUBLE AND TO BE HONEST, I WAS GLAD WHEN YOUR PARENTS DECIDED TO TAKE YOU TO THAT HOTEL BECAUSE I COULDN'T STAND THE THOUGHT OF BEING STUCK WITH YOU MONSTERS FOR TWO DAYS!" Lori was trying to figure out a way back into the hotel room. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . We know you are!". The kids, of course, still had some demands to give their parents. One Squirrel tosses the bat right at Lincoln by accident. Luna. The Loud House Encyclopedia is a FANDOM TV Community. Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! [knocks Pep down], [Lynn finishes her run and gets picked up by her family in celebration of her victory. The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. I already told you, I live here. You never let me have a say in the matter! She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. Lucy: Come on Fangs, we've got some repaying to do for Lincoln. Okay look, answer me these questions! Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. I guess this proves it! Ruth shouted at the top of her lungs. Like Lynn Sr. said, it wasn't an easy road and there were times when they were ready to give up, but they didn't and, as a result, their kids forgave them for their actions, more or less. Start talking. And Lori and Lisa. he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. Luna spots Lincoln). Fund your creativity by creating subscription tiers. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us."

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